Random Helga poem (feedback?)

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Random Helga poem (feedback?)

Post by Perhapsormaybe on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:34 am

My favorite part about writing Hey Arnold! is writing Helga's poetry. I'm bored. So I'm typing up yet another poem from Helga's view point. Be afraid. Be very afraid.

She watches me from the mirror
She mimics every move
Every smile or frown I make,
She, too, wears it
Or maybe she just takes it.

It's my reflection that speaks to you,
A mere shade of who I am.
It doesn't show the deeper parts,
Just a shallow, hallow sham.

I wonder if you see through her,
Know I'm buried deep inside
No one else knows I'm alive.

They let her fool them, day by day
Further and further I go into darkness
But wait, a light now -
How is it possible you knew I was here?
How did you see through this mess?

I watch her from the mirror
I smile, and she returns it
Both of us were saved,
True love...I guess somehow I earned it.

End

I will be in the corner, trying to figure out if I should stop writing poems at half past midnight and just go to bed like a normal person.

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Re: Random Helga poem (feedback?)

Post by Annemiek on Tue Mar 09, 2010 12:00 pm

That's beautiful <3
I wish I could write like that! You're very talented

And yes, half past midnight is the perfect time for art and poetry XD

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Re: Random Helga poem (feedback?)

Post by Perhapsormaybe on Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:22 pm

Aww, aren't you sweet! Thank you so very much for the compliment. ^_^

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